Thursday, July 21, 2011

Can you read this, guys and offer some criticism on my writing? How can I make it more interesting?

It's reasonably well written and you present your thoughts well. However, I think you may have missed the point of the original statement. When they say life was easier, they mean simpler, less complex. They're not talking about modern luxuries, such as microwave ovens, which do make life easier.

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